So the couple gets reincarnated into their first life. The author decided that the next most romantic choice after this was to make her rasie the infant male lead as a mother figure and constantly make jokes about how 'she really hoped he didn't see her as a mother figure even though she changed his diapers beacause then they couldn't get married when he was older'. What I liked about this story is that it felt like an original idea, rather than being inspired by another story. In Sansheng, the three lifetimes were more or less similar to one another in which all three took place in ancient China and in Heaven. Whereas Three Lifetimes felt more flexible because each lifetime was set in different eras and worlds.

The story has no credible antagonists. Pretty much all of them (the king from the first arc, proto-Gary in the second, and corrupt nobles and mysterious evil invaders) fit in the category "look at me! I'm evil because i'm evil" type of villain. They have no depth and seem to do bad things because that's what the plot demands. Your story definitely could have used some work here. However, there were certain things that occurred which left me feeling a little… mixed- not necessarily distaste or anger, just mixed feelings. Oops! This image does not follow our content guidelines. To continue publishing, please remove it or upload a different image.First: Where the story shined was the comedy and interactions between characters, I never failed to be entertained while reading about them. However, sometimes the character development felt rushed. Your story excels in its comedy and character interactions. My favorite moments throughout were when the main cast was sitting around talking or having a fun romp around the countryside. The drama as a whole was also fairly well done and really invests the reader in the characters and their lives. For example, in arc 1, it felt like the Moonlight Sect came into being almost overnight. And the entire time, this secret army was being built without any interference from the kingdom or anyone else? I wish Juju faced more interesting adversity in establishing the Sect, rather than just a Step 1: wave hands Step 2: commoners OP now. In arc 2, Gary's transition from super evil bully to possibly gay harem member happened way too fast. It really left me scratching my head as that transition happened over the course of a few chapters and felt out of place. As I’m sure you can tell my major problem with the story is that it all felt so rushed. That why i rate it at a 3.5; I won’t really give it a higher score when i felt that it was so rushed.

The humor is great. I loved all the jokes, singular or running. I will always think of children as little potatoes from now on. The humor is not just only in isolation though, as a lot of it derives from how well the characters play off of each other (i.e. juju's birthmark of stalking +100, her/his hilarious misunderstandings in the second arc). Finally, the jokes come in all different types. Some stories can only manage one time of humor, like romantic comedy , smut humor, or gag humor. Three Lifetimes hits you with all different kinds like domestic humor (the Merry Wives), standard romantic comedy, stalker humor. The lists go on and on. Ch.5 : (no major change just a single missing panel, the second last. Nothing imprortant missing. Can skip) EDIT : Author has shifted her work over to Tapas! And released a webtoon version of it as well! Don't mind me running over to read that~ EDIT [14.05.2023]: Can't find the book nor the author on Wattpad any longer 😕. Guess re-read needs to wait till I find this treasure again.. In each lifetime, Juju and Jin Lei had to go through a love trial, and each trial was set in a new world where they were put into different circumstances and had to face certain obstacles. Every lifetime was unique and gave me all these different kinds of feels that I admittedly don't get from many XianXia transmigration novels since they are meant to be light reads. There were laughs and heartbreak both. And the author for this books has a talent for playing with our emotions in every which way, and I ended up nearly crying in one part (it's really hard to make me cry at all so that's saying something). But in the end, the book had a good ending, so it was all worth it.

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The ending of the 3rd arc felt too rushed, as well. Luce dies too abruptly and Alenaire becomes depressed. While, yes, the story says Alenaire felt depressed and fell ill about Luce and Zephyr dying, but I didn’t exactly feel her agony and pain from separating from her love, Luce. The writing was adequate, even if I felt like things could have been more developed and is seen more actual scenes that developed the relationships between characters. There's an edge to the story where everyone talks about falling for Juju even though the actions of the story never really explain why some do or it seems too sudden for it to build up to the extent they seem to imply their love for her is. I like this story, a lot. It's light hearted, fun, endearing, and dramatic all in different proportions across the 3 arcs. The grammar is very good and the prose is often quite hilarious. If you have not read this, you should, because it's good. All in all, this is very solid 4/5. I actually took off half a star because of some issues I had with the story construction, but those are relatively minor. Rewatch Value 8.5 WARNING: I do tend to vote a little nicer, so other's opinions might be different. It was very captivating because I really wanted to know who the girl ends up with. It was a pain watching each episode because both male leads are very good candidates for a husband, so you will be on the edge of your seat the entire time. I loved both of them. It was a little sad at times, but I didn't cry that much. I personally think this is a great cast. The female lead did a great job. She tends to talk very softly at times and it makes me feel really nice and comfortable. She also cries a lot and I think she looks nice crying, but near the latter half, she cried A LOT. I love both male leads, and I think that Zhu Yi Long portrayed his character really well. He is kind of expressionless. For the first 10 or even 20 episodes, he rarely smiled. Despite being really happy or really loves the girl, he just talks with a poker face. It is actually pretty hard to always not smile when he wanted to. He also loves the main girl dearly. I really dislike the ending. Some people might like it, but I preferred that they go without it. The latter half got a bit draggy for me, but other than that, it was fine. Music-wise, I like the theme song, which is by Zhu Yi Long. One of the insert songs is good too. I rated story 9 because I liked the whole guessing husband thing. Rewatch value is just plain opinion. I would've rated overall a 10, but that ending and the drag of the later half ruined that perfect score.

Second: The plot was alright. It started off well, but as it went on it felt really rushed and forced. Really the whole story felt rushed. I think it would have been better if each arc had taken more time establish itself and end itself properly. If you're looking for a cold, ruthless MC, this book isn't for you. Juju is a ball of sunshine, and I love her for it. She's sweet, mischievous, and ambient, but not some Mary Sue saint. Jin Lei isn't some a** to her, and they are such a cute couple. I find her and all the characters around her funny—even her father who is the death god and her uncle who is the Jade Emperor. I especially loved her spirit beast/ guy friend/ cat, Seiren. Third: While i liked the character interactions, and that they were all different; I also felt that for side characters their development felt so rushed.Fortunately, the author was sympathetic enough to give us a Jin-Juju lifetime (#2) that was all giggles. I honestly thought that it'd be yaoi but I don't know how the author managed to make it even better by going in a whole new direction. Definitely re-reading this if I'm in mood for 'fluff' and 'no drama'. Ugggghhhh it was so mushy with endless volumes of dog food being fed to the readers. I sobbed, snot & all at all the sad scenes - so keep them tissues at hand, dear future readers :)

In the begining she falls in love with the ML at first sight and the romance feels very shallow. I didn't really mind that because I think attraction is a good starting point for any relationship and I though that they wouldhave to talk and form a deeper connection at some point. Except, thats not what happened at all. I didn't hate it or anythig. I was just a little dissapointed. I thought this story would be very different from what it actually turned out to be. I was drawn in by the promise of a romance where the women does the chasing for a indifferent man as a change of pase. What it was... something else lol.

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i really like the characters, juju is so cute and you just wana see how she developes relationships with jin lei in each world. she is very strate forward and optimistic. she is basicly a runofthemill wuxia romance FL... but i really like her. Juju fell in love with Jin Lei, the God of War, at first glance. Determined to sweep him off his feet, she accompanies him down to the mortal realm as he takes on his three trials to attain greater divinity. I don't think this was one of the best works I read but it was worth a read and if better quality than a lot of RoyalRoad. It kept my interest, even though the story itself didn't really seem to have any really good twists. Anyway, a little off topic, but I seriously recommend this novel, whether or not you’re a sansheng fan or a regular reader. The cover is a snippet from the novel's new comic on Tapas, where you could also find the novel, as it's no longer on Wattpad)